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Ghosts Haiku by `Anavah:iconAnavah:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2009 `Anavah
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:iconmoyanii: Contest Entry

I keep a little book of collages/haiku I do out in nature. This one is of dead leaves from last year's spring and new ones from now (with some gold leaf thrown in for decor). I normally use calligraphy but this day I had forgotten my inks and grabbed a sharpie so I wouldn't forget. It's almost like tripping down the stairs in the midst of descending gracefully!!


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*tinkwig Jun 1, 2009, 10:19:37 AM
Oh! Instant fave!

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*YouInventedMe Jun 1, 2009, 10:39:03 AM
lovely (words & image both)

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~Dementium Jun 1, 2009, 11:25:14 AM
I like this- very creative. I love how the ending is "the ghosts of spring". I have a book of haikus, but they're a translation of the Japanese so the syllables don't exactly match up exactly.
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~pseudometry Jun 1, 2009, 3:20:19 PM
wonderful haiku: the season and the image and the suggested sound and motion. I think the visuals complement it nicely.

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~moyanII Jun 1, 2009, 3:43:12 PM
the ink seeping out into the paper and spreading slightly does fit the 'ghostly' theme well!

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~TragicMeans Jun 1, 2009, 3:47:48 PM
I can see how the calligraphy would work better, all the same, a very pretty poem, and a nice, warm image to go along with it.
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=CornerstoneAscetic Jun 1, 2009, 4:48:40 PM
I like it, but
what's a kachina leaf?
a type of tree?
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EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
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Mar 14, 2004, 9:55:25 AM

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